tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34356774.post116579692322724912..comments2014-09-03T21:21:18.877-07:00Comments on Jordan Keats: Issue AnalysisAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06380551274276375700noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34356774.post-1173533322403078662007-03-10T05:28:00.000-08:002007-03-10T05:28:00.000-08:00Jordie:I know this is an old post and you probably...Jordie:I know this is an old post and you probably won't even see that you have a new comment. Topic sentences bit me in the ass in Grade 11, which is when I had one of my most memorable and helpful teachers of all time. After all those years in school and after all those essays, I had no idea about topic sentences until I was almost leaving high school. As you said though, it's important to befriend them...Gigihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16652010358608964133noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-34356774.post-1166506033199901512006-12-18T21:27:00.000-08:002006-12-18T21:27:00.000-08:00I bit off more than I could chew with this essay, ...I bit off more than I could chew with this essay, I did so much research and I am still not satisfied with it. One of the comments that I should make topic sentences my best friend is something that I need to work on and tried to adopt in revising. My problem is that I try to add poetic liscence and make what I try to convey interesting to read, not like a scientific paper. I did stray off topic in first paragragh, as was pointed out by an editor, and tried to tighten that idea up and join the two issues I was discussing. In the transfer over from Writely the font changed and the paragraph indentation as well... computers... I do think that I have done well with them considering that before this course I was a ludite.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06380551274276375700noreply@blogger.com